Reviews for transit in the rain
bjw chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Wow, this is really...unusual.I love the last two lines, I never thought of rain that way! The array of feelings you portray with a poem this simple is amazing. I really like it!
Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Very interesting, I like it.
Chris Taylor chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
odd, eerie, and all about being on a bus, i like! it's different, yet not so different that it's unrelatable. Fantastic. This is going on my favs list, and so are you _.

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FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
not bad smackalicious. like the ending and the feelings portrayed. well done!