I loved this. Once again, I can relate...except instead of my mother, it was my father. You are an amazing writer.

That was so awesome I love it! So pumped full with emotion, sweet. caliorbust

This is really good...Good title and everything.

Wow...I really like this one... I say that every time don't I? Well, it's true. With this one... It's why I hide, to be true. The last line twist is really good, it took me by surprise. That one word shifts the perspective of the song, and it's a huge shift. It's really cool how you did that.

Great song lyrics! I really like!

Write on!

~Anna~