Reviews for Frustrated Tension
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Seems staggered in places.

'At onceYou knowMy dear'

In the first paragraph works really well to almost change topic slightly by using short adbrupt lines. It's good.
celticheartbeat chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I like this one. I think the last four lines are my favorite! :D