|Reviews for Frustrated Tension|
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Seems staggered in places.
'At onceYou knowMy dear'
In the first paragraph works really well to almost change topic slightly by using short adbrupt lines. It's good.
| celticheartbeat chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I like this one. I think the last four lines are my favorite! :D