|Reviews for Strawberry Gashes|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Again a powerful and deeply moving piece, I like the image of the totem, and the idea/ feeling of the inner child being destroyed by the cutting/ SI of any kind is something I have thought/felt myself, you have expressed that really well. The pen is quite mighty, i hope it proved mightier than the blade in this case. *big cuddle* I'm thinking of you.
| elmarko chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
i sorta like it, probably cos i keep writing stuff about this topic, although by 'played with the title of a JOJ song' you actually mean stole it... i was fully expecting the lyrics lol. keep it up hun
| Jazzista chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
The strawberry images make this poem what it is. Very well written.