Reviews for chrysalis
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Beautifully conveys the message. (Nice title by the way.) The last line hits like a punch in the gut after reading the lines above.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
lovely (yet tragic) description of the - erhm, shall we say "leap" - into adulthood. is there no inbetween anymore? great portrayal.

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
interesting ending
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
A pleasing, sensual image, brief but lingering.
linaeve chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
oh, what a perfect illustration of that tenuous transition from girl to almost-woman. simply amazing.
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
i love it! one of my favorites for sure, it has this special tone to it, and it's just amazing!
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Wonderfully sad. Shimmyshimmy on.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
thank you, yes I fixed the mistake and I'm glad you reminded me. ; that was embarressing. XDD I really love this, lovely lovely sentences and breath taking word use. again amazing and well done! _ I love it!

!~* noelle *~!
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
ah, the loss of innocence portrayed very well.

WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
that's exactly how it feels to be at that part in life. cool