Reviews for Damsel in Distress
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
this had a good ending and it made it go from "cute" to "oh yeah!"
Tatsu the Blade Star chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
well no wonder you broke up with the guy! He obviously has no idea how to wear that armor. Nice metaphor, BTW.

A guy commenting on a break-up poem... i'm so mortified... My friends must never hear of this...
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
you tell 'em. An in-your-face piece that was meant to strike directly to the heart and soul.
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
another good poem. you have this theme of breaking free in your poems that is very nice its rare that you find that.

happy monday