Reviews for he waits for transcendence
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
LOVE it! Especially the ending. Leaves the reader hanging, and beautifully conveys the feelings/state of mind of the subject.
addie pray chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
I love the format and wording in this, it's delicious. Very very sharp; I adore this.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
love the ending & & & its awesome... an the title to... great job as always
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
i can picture this dark, dank scene.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
What a depth to this character-like sketch.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
beautiful, so powerfully done and emotionally ridden in emotion. I love it, again amazing work and breath taking use of words.

!* noelle *!
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I adore it. First verse you have no idea; it's wonderful.