Reviews for afterbite
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
What a change in emotion have way through. Very subtle and well done. One thinks that the sensual description is one written favorably and it turns out to be of loathing.
Captain Blunderbuss chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Ick. I have to say, you really are effective in getting your feelings across. First of the exilleration of his embrace, but then the skin-crawling hate spawned of his trechery. Relationship gone wrong, am I right? I find that that's where most poetry comes from. I'm not saying it has to go wrong, but relationships in general. *shrug*