Reviews for Healing
Gonzovalies chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
I really like your style of wrtiting... this is another nice poem...
RootbeerFloat chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Fantasically written! Sorry I haven't been on lately, I haven't had the time to write poetry, but now I'm back and thought I'd check up on my favorite poet! (who I noticed has not updated in a while as well) *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge* ANYWAYS, I really liked this poem; it has a lot of emotional baggage and thought put into it.
somerandomdude chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Again a simple poem, but it express your feelings well.
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Great, great work... can relate to it, this is fabulous touching poem. Great! I like! lots.
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
thats life. life is the hardest battle to be fought but the rewards are worth it. happy teusday
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
reminds me of myself. You have a great inner strength inside you. Your ex must have been blind not to see that!
Room Without A Door chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I like the ending, really nice building uo to the conclusion, love it.
The Sleepy Poet chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I would lit to say: It's utter crap.

First, the only punctuation is a comma, and then nothing.

Second: You repeat simplistic imagery (Cold, dark, ect.) too many times,

Third: It's angst.
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Good display of depression here, and the fight that comes with it. I feel your words. Writer of Darkness
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Beautiful poem, very well written, love the optimism n good luck to keep on healing.
thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
i love this so much. it's so honest and well written. the repitition insures the effect and if nobody gets this then consider them daft. you've done an excellent job; i commend you!