|Reviews for We Imagine|
| Jason Brown chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
I was looking through your FictionPress stuff and saw this. I may remember very vaguely seeing this before... but I think the whole thing is very beautifully done and I thought you needed to know so from me, even if it is a bit late.
Not just because of who it's about... and I noted the date when you wrote it. I just hope you keep the same things in mind and heart now that you did when you were writing. Nothing between us has ever gotten worse, we've only gotten better. When I read this it reminds me a lot of the walk we planned...
I think you should read the whole thing again, you did a great job on it. :)
No matter how things get, those feelings you have recorded there are what we can always come back to at the end of the day.
Now here's the deal, some of the imagery didn't strike me as well as others, and the form was a bit sloppy in terms of syllabic content and rhymes, and while tied up at the end, seems to ramble a bit in the middles. And another thing...
Pullin' yer leg. Hehehehahaha. :D
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
this is really good, and so easy to relate to, great job, thank you for sharing