Reviews for Rose: A Tragic Fairytale
Young King101 chapter 2 . 6/23/2005
Cool how she's gotten to know him this way. Update soon please!

Young King101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
It's ok, I think this is a very interesting tale you've started. You should go back though and fill in where you missed some words; and there was a spot where you put 'was' and I think it should have been 'were'. I'm off to chapter 2.


P.S. And to Barbados, I think it's Fables your talking about, not Fairytales.
Angel Jenna chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Good job. It is better than you seem to think. I love fairytales and I'm enjoying this one. Update soon!
Barbados chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I'm no expert, but I think fairy tales are generally about a moral. "The moral of the story is..." what? I'm not sure here. I think, though, that you have the right idea of a fairy tale writing style.
Siren of Lyrics chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Very nice. A good tale. I'll be waiting for more.
Devonshirelass chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I read the story out to the real critics, my sons and niece, they both loved it! My son is 6 and the other is 2, and my niece is 3. I would say my niece enjoyed it the most. She loves her fairy tales!