This world uou have created, could fit right into the world of Adventure Time. As a matter of fact, I think they stole your idea. I think Princess Gwen could take out Princess Bubblegum. Tristan could handle Fin. I think Leonard should team up with Jake the Dog for some awesome adventures too!

This is hilarious and suddenly I am a fan of deeply bitter and sarcastic writers.

*sighs happily* this is ,like, my fave fantasy/humour/romance story ever! Btw U should really Mark this story as complete. Bye!

AWwwwwwwww that is sooooooo sad :'(

WTH?! Why do tou have Cinderella in here?

Sorry bout not reveiwing for 3 chp's anyway I loved it when she got high on sugar! Oh,btw HOW CAN U GET HIGH ON SUGAR?!

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holy crap ur story is FUNNY, HILARIOUS, MARVELLOUS not perfect, mind you, but still really really nice!

OMG OMG OMG I loved the doo doo thing, u know where both of them stepped in doo doo!

And I also loved this :-
"She's not-"

"He's not—"

"Too much—"

"Wimp—"

"Psychotic—"

"Stressed—"

"Hyper—"

"Uptight—"

"Freak." We finished the last part together.

Lmao

Loved it yadi yadi yada

Okay first of all THIS IS NOT A STUPOD STORY second of all OMFG I love gwen!

OMG ur story is great, except that it's in progress but whatever, but what is up with the MAGIC AND LEMONS thing? I mean it's...um...very...unique?

"You mean run away?" Tristan asked, looking suddenly ill and anxious, "From the King?"

"He's my father," I said, "And that makes it all right. Now hurry up. I only got so long."

so funy! :D

I LOVED this story! :) Even though it wasn't very good at the beginning(Please don't take offence!) it turned out to have this twisting plot which I enjoyed very much! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

NO NO NO! Tristan CAN'T die! Anyways... I laughed so hard when Gwen said: "And that means I can kick your butt like no other." It was HILARIOUS! Amazing job with this story! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

I have just started reading this story but it is really hilarious! :) And I absolutly adore the "Magic and Lemons, Break in the Story"! It cracks me up!