|Reviews for Existance|
| SSSSS chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Wonderful! I love the contrast of the poem. By the way, thanks for the review. I wrote another poem, not as long though. Anyways, great poem; you've got a strong ,Sam
| saintsinnerlady chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
very descriptive i love it. i wanna go to the light lol. keep up the good work im going to add you to my fave list
| Blind Illusions chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
I REALLY LOVE this poem! HTe way you cfontrast between the two and describe each one is amazing! When you're describing the place where it's light and harmonious, u make me want to be there. The darkness that you descibe is very vivid and i like the way you worded everything. This is so Great!
| Hunter of Lost Souls chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
By the way, thanks for the review!
| Okami-Kokoro-Inochi chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Very strong poem here. Very deep. I like the discriptiveness here and I love the imagery it is very thorough and well done. Your poem is very well rounded and it has a different style to it, and you are very clear upon what contrasting the two. But can light not also have bad and dark have good as well?
| Pearls and Formaldehyde chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I like the comparisons and descriptions in this. I love how you described the dark as to where I could believe that's what it's like.
You've got a lot of talent! More than myself, I know that!
| morning-flower chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
This was great, I like how descriptive it was. Thankyou for your review :)
| A. Alicia Rodriguez chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Great poem. Nice description. I always kind of think differently about hell. I've always imagined it to be a dark room. With nothing. No sound, no smell, no touch. Just darkness where you stay there and go insane.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Wow, wow, wow, I am thoroughly impressed, completely and utterly, what an awesome poem. You got talent my friend.
| Xbakiyalo chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Ooh, good comparisons. I like the sudden change from good to bad. Although, it is a bit depressing to finish on a bad note :)
| Darthen chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Wow, thats amazing, two very contrasting worlds. Somewhere in the middle is our world. Excellent jorb.
| La Velvetine chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I enjoyed the contrasts. The light so was happy and cheerful,and the darkness was gloomy and melancholic. I also guess it forces you to think about extremes in everyday life, at least it did for me. Nice.
| sempre-e-por-sempre chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
...i liked the idea of this...and i also like all the descriptions used...i think it's really amazing! the only thing i would change is that i would have a transition...from the light to the dark...but i can also understand that the abrupt switch can symbolize the drastic differences between light and dark...anyway...great job! i really enjoyed it!*Kiss* sempre-e-por-sempre
| Moonbeam Elegance chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
wow-really gets your mind going...
by the way thankyou for reviewing my haiku
| Teary Eyed Girl chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
You said I'm good but you're diffinetly better.
Keep up the good work.