Reviews for Mona Lisa
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
it's all just a facade, no one's perfect. everyone has weaknesses, faults. outshine her, if you believe you can, you will. i believe you can.
Jesse Jacob chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
I really like this one, regardless of its tragedy. The line, "As tears kiss my lips" is pure elegance. Nicely done.
Baron Sanity chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Extremely well written. Good Good Poetry.
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
i love it! the emotions show through so well, and the rhyming makes it perfect! Great Job!
Twigstudios1972 chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Awesome. Just freakin' awesome. I love this piece. So sad yet beautiful. Very well written.