Reviews for turpentine: a soother for pain
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
i love how you include second thoughts, alternate meanings, and elaborations in parentheses. it adds to both the aesthetics by creating an interesting format and also (and more importantly) the meaning of the poem. great work.
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Love the imagery in this one. And nice emotion, too.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Again, good piece. Simpler ending but it's good.
addie pray chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Boys are weak (PATHETIC) drugs that cause a crash most awful. And girls are just the same. I loved this. Very bright images.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Very cutting and direct.
these travels chapter 1 . 6/7/2005

poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
again, powerfully done and beautiful in many ways. I love it, keep up the great work!

!~* noelle *~!
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
good cathartic vision/action. ps. will u & ur friend ever give up on those "dicks" and seal ur pact by getting "along" with just u & her? i wish i had when i was there, long ago, and those girls went on, just as i, floating into meaningless choppy seas. all of us either drift accidentally, or intentionally, apart... good poem. SWAK