|Reviews for Funeral|
| Plinky chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Aw, beautifully written.
"Chimed in a second one" I love the use of the words chimed. (Odd words jump out at me as working well. It's a strange thing I get.)
Lovely emotion. I like how you portray the children as being more perceptive and intelligent than they are assumed to be.
Flows beautifully. Really well written.
| Knightmare Elite chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
It was a nice piece with a more realistic approach to handling the death of a loved one. I do feel bad for the children having to go on like that. Even if they will eventually see through the delucion, it's better than living a life of pain and seperation.