Reviews for Pink Gender
S061 chapter 22 . 4/22/2013
Hello, I think your story is amazing and i really enjoyed it, but i'm wondering if you're going to finish it. I think that this story still has the potential for another few chapters but you have left it on a cliffhanger so i hope that you can at least finish the story even if it's only one more chapter. However i hope that you can find it in you to write several more chapters. This story of yours is amazing and a one of a kind.
hawkcam1996 chapter 22 . 6/24/2012
You just gonna leave us hanging? How did Oshizu put realize Miko was Momose? You haven't updated for two years so have you forgotten about or given up on this story? You said there was still another chapter. This story is pretty good. I like it when you have it in different POVs. I think you should continue this story(hopefully even after your planned ending) and alternate between POVs.
AmatureAuthor chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
hm... not so boy-ish boy? sounds EXACTLY like my best friend and crush patrick!

oh, and btw, LOVE IT!
Tree Flower chapter 22 . 7/20/2010
Yay it's updated! The ending of this chapter...!

I wonder how she figured out or whatever... Oh can't wait for the next chapter! :D
gypsy2008 chapter 22 . 7/20/2010
Whoa! I couldn't believe there was an update!

*falls out of my chair and lands on the floor with a crash*

And Oshizu figuring out that Miko and Momose are the same person? How'd that happen? Did Miko change back? Or did Oshizu just make the connection somehow? And if so, how?
estrellaSMC chapter 21 . 3/12/2010
I hope you're planning on going back to Miko's perspective after this. I like her perspective a lot better than Bunzo/Iroha.
Long Island Iced Tea chapter 2 . 3/6/2010
Long Island Iced Tea chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
This is fascinating. I read a recommendation about your story on a fictionpress forum and decided I had to check it out. I must say, I'm quite impressed.
Liviania chapter 21 . 8/6/2008
Nice twist - I thought Bunzo was going to leave as well. It's good that his parents accepted the change.

Keahi19 chapter 21 . 7/26/2008
Oh believe me I have to work hard to get him to know what's what and work as his co-author. *Nods* And yeah sorry for the lateness of the last two chapters. That was 100% my fault. I apologize.

And not a big deal? I'll get the boiling lard.
Nolonegrusedaccount chapter 21 . 7/12/2008
The last few chapters were, in my opinion, absolutely great...perfection...

I have so few words, except that they were wonderful...

See ya! Great Story!
Nolonegrusedaccount chapter 19 . 7/11/2008
Okay! So I guess all that suspicion I had built up towards Sojiro's motives were unwarrented? Either way, I wonder if Miko will choose to go back to how things were, with her/his newfound confidence? And I am shocked(well, not really...) that Bunzo was afraid s/he lost Miko as a friend!

At least one of my thoughts were correct!

Anyways, I wonder what will happen at the conclusion of this story, because at this point it's like playing Russian Roulette with the hearts of the main cast! (don't ask)

Either way, I will leave it at this: you, Sir, are a great writer!


See ya!
Nolonegrusedaccount chapter 17 . 7/11/2008
Oddly, I see poor Miko/Momose's little slice of heaven coming to a shattering halt...seeing as if Sojiro and Oshizu even so much as speak to one another of Miko's "mother" being in town/out of town poor Miko's secret is gonna be found out...

And with that I must say this story's final chapter is gonna be hard to accept...

Well, I'm still wondering what will happen with Bunzo and the like, seeing as we haven't heard much from him/her for like, what? Two chapters?

Anyways, See ya!
Nolonegrusedaccount chapter 16 . 7/11/2008
Damn, I am feeling sorry for Oshizu right now...My guess(although with you I shouldn't etch it in stone), is that Miko is going to choose to go back to being a boy...well, that's kinda what I want. But I am wondering what reason he, and Bunzo are suffering from this..."malady" for, anyways? Is there a certain lesson they're supposed to learn from all this?

Maybe it's...

Well, my theories aside for now!

Anyways, great story! And getting better by the word!

See ya!
Nolonegrusedaccount chapter 14 . 7/11/2008
This chapter was good, especially poor Miko', "time of the month"...

Yeah, I know that your female readers are now in the process of hunting me down and burning me to death for making light of such a trumatic time, but three sisters and assorted female cousins into my life and I could care less...

Well, I still hold firm to my theory that Sojiro isn't as noble as he seems, although I guess that's just me being paranoid/suspicious as always...not that it's a bad thing...

But anyways...Bunzo is still on my mind, and I wonder still what her tantrum was about? Was she feeling trheatened by Sojiro, and thought that Miko didn't want to be ehr friend anymore? Or, is there deeper feelings here?

Oh, well...Guess I'll just have to read further to find out!

Good story.

See ya!
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