Reviews for Eternal Silence
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Nice...lots of action in the beginning, then stops to a dramatic hush! Very good.
Seaspray chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Gosh that's sad- that last line really hits hard, it contrasts well with the activeness of the first two lines. Very powerful.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/28/2005 really brings the feelings and emotions of the Tsunami closer...makes it more real. Great job. I like your writing style. :) Keep writing!
senbi chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I like the way your words potray the devastation & loss. Beautifully done.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Is this to be about the Tsunami? Oh, just read your summary. Then I was correct! A testament to the skill of this poem, it expressed precisely those lost emotions. Well done.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I personally would replace 'and' in the 2nd line with -, but that's just me. I don't like haikus personally - too rigid for me - but this is good, very powerful with a strong ending. Good work.