|Reviews for Unrequited|
| somerandomdude chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Do I sense a little vexation here? Nice choice of words.
| ygg chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
I like it a lot! Very sad, profound yet subtle. Every word is perfect in this one, creating its unique sense. Keep writing please :)
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
So soft and gentle with sadness.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
beautiful and perfectly describes urequited love, beautiful and well written. tender and lovely. has its own beautiful charm to it.
!* noelle *!
| rebeldork chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I like this haiku. It's succinct but brings emotion. It's short, though-instead of just one haiku, you could write two or three, or more, and make a collection. Good work.