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Oh god this was so good

This story is amazing! I was not sure what was going to happen . . . it was just so sad and heartbreaking. I love how you play and put memories of the past and then go to the present. I love seeing from both perspectives too. I am glad to see a happy ending for the two, I like how in the end, it is just a fight for them. It is scary to think how much worse their fights could possibly get . . . if this is their "first" fight. I am glad they both needed each other and the fact that I guess their loss made them more creatively talented (like her writing style . . . his music . . . ). I am glad they decided to work this out because their lives would have sucked so badly without each other. I love seeing their happy moments, it was so cute. He is so cute. It does annoy me how much he drinks and smokes, but I guess it is just his flaw . . . and OK . . . he has more flaws than that. But he is still so lovable.

wow that was amazing! i have never been this emotional on fictionpress or fanfic. AMazing. the pace was so perfect i just cant believe it . Juxtaposing the relationship with the break up was so perfect. MY GOD. It reminded me of eternal sunshine of the spotless mind. It was simple you didn't have any adjective porn it was so real. The fight was so real I could feel each of their points of view. So beautiful!AAAAAAAAAAh!

Wow I love the simple yet meaningful :)

This was...Amazing. I'm speechless (for once). I...they...her...him...just...Wow.

this is a pretty good story! it has a great plotline and i like how you've integrated the past into the present, but i have only problem with it: the fight scene seems a bit underdone. Lana kind of went from talking sleepily to yelling, and suddenly he just up and left. Please don't be offended, I'm only offering criticism because i found your story to be a great read and that to be a bit of a downer. But everything else was awesome! I love how shes an author and hes a rock star. good work!

That was pretty real - not horribly gushy and it was honest - more honest than some of the fluff out there (not that I don't love a sappy story cause I love sap) but this was really great! Definitely different and interesting!

I have no words for how good that ending was. :)

You know, that was actually amazing. You got the level of simplicity whilst still allowing us to feel really connected to characters just right. The last chapter had me tearing up at the raw intensity of it. Well done.

Sian x

I love the story so far, can't wait to read the rest of it!

This story is brilliant. I like how the story is so simple in terms of writing, yet speak depths of emotion. Love the ending, it really fits Micah's character. Real life is more like this, I mean, do people often have huge romantic scenes when making up? Keep writing!

Cute.

This is a cute story but I guess I feel like it was a little disconnected, and kind of lacked the development that your other stories have. I mean, I guess you did develop their relationship, but it just seemed a bit disjointed and like they had split personalities or something. I guess I just had a really hard time seeing the Micah from before as the Micah now, and connecting them together to be one person. And I feel like we didn't really get to know Lana's character very well either. Everything was really short and unexplained and I guess I just feel like... it just grazed the surface of the events that happened, but didn't actually elaborate on them and go any deeper.

I like the idea though, and the layout of your fic. I guess just more details, maybe extending it... also their fight seemed kind of anti-climatic too. Like they were happy and then they weren't. There wasn't much build up to it, I suppose. But I still like Lana & Micah together. :)

- Alyssa