|Reviews for Farewell to Eden|
| Moonlight24 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I can never understand why an Athesist like myself would be intrested in religion but I like this poem anyways. Darkness suits you well.
| Prevaricate chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Powerful imagery. My only complaint is that this line: "All mankind now tainted and stained." doesn't seem to flow as well.. if it were mine, I would replace "tainted" with a one-syllable word to keep the rhythm going. But maybe I'm on the wrong beat altogether, so ignore that. This is good, especially the last two lines.