Reviews for Forgotten Children
Thunderstorm101 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Very nice, touching and everything. Your poetry is very unique.
kitten chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
This was haunting ... It stirred images and somehow I think those images would be different for everyone, depending on your personal perspective. I love poetry like this because it *can* speak to anyone and it conveys something deep.
youzi chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
I liked "A sound without echo

ringng through dale and hill"...but i doubt i can really relate to the plight of refugees. a challenging topic. Keep writing D
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
who's elohim? and is this based upon a book? interesting, sounds like the forgotten children have gone off to the world of the living spirits. nice poem
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Great poem! Write on!