Wow. Dark. Good but dark. Although true - it's sort of confusing but it makes sense. Very nice - I like your poetry. I've read some of your other poems too - very good. PS - thanks for your review on my poem! Im glad you liked it. Yes, Im 14. Only true thing on my profile. Again, I love your poems!

You *are* really good. I'm impressed. Great job.

I think this sums it up nicely, lol. So very true and that's kinda sad. Well written

awesome poem...you have an amazing talent to be able to tie a story into your poetry...and each line made you a little more grateful for the things we have, and a little more knowledgeable on the different lives out there. great job, keep writing.