Reviews for When Time Sleeps
CaleeChanteuse0305 chapter 21 . 8/3/2007
hey there! i fell in love with your rendition of sleeping beauty. that's also my favorite movie, hehe. i just noticed when your last update was, update soon please!

oh, and also a minor detail:

"all those future dukes and duchesses, lords and ladies, they are all just bundles of hormones"

the term "hormone" wasn't coined until about 100 years ago, i might have missed when this story is supposed to take place but i'm guessing more that 100 years ago right?
Venus Smurf1 chapter 21 . 7/28/2007
This is, bar none, one of the best fairy tale renditions I've ever encountered! You've taken a story that's become a cliche and rendered it fresh and delightful, and I just adore you. Hope you update soon!
CerriC chapter 21 . 5/8/2007
I love Philip! He seems so... human. XD I can't wait to see where this is going, though I do miss Lucie. I hadn't really expected to miss her - when I was reading about her I couldn't wait to get to this part. Now that we're here, though, I find myself wondering what she's up to!

"but he swore that there was a knowing smile on his face." - 'his face' should be 'her face', no?

I know that I'm a little late in r&r... Sorry about that. _ Now that Spring Semester is over, though, I should be able to keep up again!
Hidden Flowers chapter 3 . 5/7/2007
I'm whining now. Why won't you do more?
Treg chapter 21 . 4/3/2007
Its good but u tend to go on unneccessarily on some parts to the point where its wayy off the plot and starts to get dull and tedious to read... it was ok in part one because the story was intresting and tied lot into the original sleeping beauty plot... but with princess naomi's possible bethrothed... an entire chapter on that? it just seems to go off topic alot... I'm only pointing this out because i really liek this sotry, and it would be a shame if it went off topic and became boring as so many other fics tend to do before they reach their full potential.
the flaming river chapter 21 . 2/6/2007
This is really good. I really want to read more. I'll keep a look out. Please post soon!
lool chapter 21 . 1/26/2007
free-to-dream15 chapter 21 . 1/18/2007
Love Philip no matter what happens with him! lol No one can crush my love for him! ok little freaky I know..Good update! Sorry it took me FOREVER to read!
Celtic Dancer chapter 21 . 1/8/2007
yay! new chapter!

Honestly, I love this story to pieces. I really love the way you've taken the basic tale and changed the perspective to make it your own, and then to build on that even more.

It all flows together very nicely; I was a bit disappointed when I had finished because, as of now, there is no more for me to read.

Eaerly awaiting the next installment,

The Gobbler chapter 16 . 1/7/2007
Good last two chapters; I'm sorry I haven't reviewed you in so long. It wasn't that long of a break, though (I mean you updating) was it?

Hm... well, these last two chapters have confirmed my suspicions about Adriel, and I especially like how you're setting it up so that (I think) one of the princess' fairygodmothers is best friends with the villain. I was a little bit confused about how they were making it -seem- like Dorinda and Lucie were special students; if they picked them out to work for the king, wouldn't they want them to be bright? Or did that just mean they made them out to be more clever than they really were? Good chapter, over all (is that one word or two?), though, I'm looking forward to the fairytale.
SaintZero182 chapter 4 . 1/7/2007
So far, so good. I lopve how you actually had the characters set in a medival-modern kind of time [That's what i pictured it as].
ZealousKnight chapter 21 . 1/5/2007
Of course I'm still here! You think I'd abandon this story after coming so far? I was quite excited to get my author alert. (By the way, I'm cooking up something myself. Right now it's in the developmental stages, but hopefully I'll have a workable first chapter up soon.)

Your writing is enjoyable as always. Quite a bit of explanatory narrative going on in this chaper and not as much character interaction, but it's important information. This is shaping up to be quite interesting for Phillip.
Fairytale Gurl chapter 20 . 12/19/2006
i. adore. phillip. and i love adriel - omgosh i feel SO bad fro her and hoenstly i love ur take on the tale. it's unqiue and different but it works!

pleae update soon!

early awaiting,

fairytale gurl
whocares chapter 20 . 12/6/2006
great chappie! cant wait for more!
Alexis LePlume chapter 20 . 11/12/2006
Somehow I missed 19 and 20 getting posted. The change of view to Philip's is interesting. I can guess that he's a fun charrie to write for. I only saw about two mistakes where you used the wrong proverb, entirely by accident. Other than that, the chapters were flawless. I love how the story is prgressing, and I hope to read more soon. Good luck!

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