What's sad is that this could have actually happened (yes, I know, it was for a school project, so it must be semi-accurate)... I like the way you set out the story and let it flow. Great.

I liked it. I love reading stuff like this. Just a few things: "Me and Hans.." it should be Hans and I. And "Arian" is with a y, not an i. But besides that, this is really good. )

~*Toni*~