Reviews for Perfect Beauty
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I used to be a grunger-hiding-in-the-background-with-cut-up-arms, but now I am much more confident and I dress a bit more suitably. It's probably due to the trauma and stress that I went through in hospital. Oh weil.
Flamevixen chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Nice poem. Very true about the popular jerks I know at my school. Good job. keep up the good work!
Prevaricate chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
The word usage and language is good. This is almost written in a prose-like form, just seperated into lines, but that's okay. It could be improved, I think, by adding some punctuation. "In the tom-boy dressing" is one line that stuck out, to me.. I think that could be improved as well, changed to something a bit more descriptive. Less clich├ęd, if you will.

Good job.

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