Reviews for Cold
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
OMG. REALLY sad. It's like those MADD emails. "I went to a party mom" like that... So sad. The last line was so powerful. You do a really good job of ending things well. I hate when people write sucky endings. You don't have that problem, though. Yay! Ok so amazing poem. So sad. I have tears in my eyes.
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
i like it. i really do. can i tell you this? i think everyone has a poem called cold. i do. except mines about a guy.
miss lavender chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Very nice. Reminded me of that one song.. Where the girl dies in the car crash? Get my drift, or am I just spurtting out jargon? Well, anyways, Great poem!

-Lav
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
This one put an image in my mind, Like a girl slowly sinking to the bottom of an ocean, her reaching up and seeing the Hallucination of her loved one, and then it dissapearing. And I can see her waiting...