Reviews for color spectrum
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I love this. The formatting pushes the tempo along, giveing it this vibrant feeling as if the poem has come to life. And, of course, I completely agree with everyone that the last two lines are bloody brilliant. Well done!

This is going on my favs.

GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Love the message and love the structure. A nice mix of everything. Beautiful to read and look at.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
loved the downwards words. great title, great force & feeling. love the message & the subtlety. great job.

do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
this is brilliant. god, and those last two lines...::sighes::
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Seems like a heavy mix of all the poetry formats you can get; CAPS no caps/()w-o-r-d-s likethisand .

Parts work well, like the downwards glides, but 'through metallic/(pores)' the use of (pores) seems pointless.

'raw/bleeding/bruised/battered' Again, this works well - 'as if take your pick'.

The last two verses are gold. Brilliant. (and coincidentally I've read something similar just before)
compunctious chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Every time I read a poem about homosexuality it has a childish vibe about it. This one doesn't. I really like it alot.
kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
sounds like loveabuse, an abusive relationship. form-wise it is VERY pretty. i just glanced at it once before reading it and it looked well... visually pleasing ; i love the.. revolutionary aspect in your poetry. something religious in here too.
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
"he has no shame/(and i envy that"you are amazing. definatly going on my favorites list.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Really nice. I love your stuff.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
beautiful and in all honesty just amazing. well worded and deep, though a bit creepy and tragic. lovely.

!~* noelle *~!