Reviews for One Last Breath
Smile chapter 17 . 1/31/2014
Is it wrong to be laughing at a chapter with a funeral in it? This very skillfully written.
xxxheartlandxxx chapter 20 . 7/29/2013
Aww how cute!
renegade01 chapter 20 . 7/8/2013
Cool story. I like the way it ends. The only thing I felt was missing was their parents reaction to it all. Apart from that, it was a good read;-)
Dominique Diane chapter 20 . 6/27/2013
LOL! I totally loved every single chapter! The only thing that worries me is what are they parents going to think about their relationship? I think is so cute, I keep imagining myself with a punk kid with electric blue hair and a piercing, and loved the mental pic! (: Not writing so much because it's like 3 am!
flamesflyer chapter 20 . 3/11/2013
I couldn't help but smile throughout this entire story. There was one part where Mandeep was telling Trista how her parents probably wouldn't approve of Rose and I, for some reason, kept picturing Raj trying to convince his friends that he isn't gay and I just started laughing.
The song though, is probably my favourite part in the story. I was crying from laughing so hard, especially at the shrinking violet part.
bookppl93 chapter 20 . 1/15/2013
Oh my god I can't believe it's done ._. I love it.
monkeyface1 chapter 20 . 1/13/2013
awww finally, im so happy for all of them! thank you so much for contiuing this story untill the end! you should be proud! i love how everything is so i dont think there are touch ups needed. thanks again. :)
mylittleprincess chapter 20 . 1/12/2013
awesome story!
bleachedsnow chapter 20 . 1/12/2013
Sweet, awesome ending. I've been following this story for a while, despite my lack of reviews. Love this story.
bookppl93 chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
Aww that was so cute ;)
mylittleprincess chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
sooooo cute! update:)
Guest chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
he is soooooooooooooo adorable!
monkeyface1 chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
lmao the song was great in my opinion, and tiergan was so freaking cute! i would die if someone sang for me. thank you so much for updating! love this story!
mylittleprincess chapter 18 . 11/21/2012
awesome story! update please.
Pursephone chapter 18 . 11/17/2012
Spending the last couple of hours to re-read this beginning to end made the sudden lack of 'next chapter' very sad and hard to handle. Any which way, I really love this story. Favorite character is Teirgan, I totally agree with his recent mantra "Stupid hormones!" Made me laugh so much. Please update? Please?
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