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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. So. This is me trying to catch up on all the poems you've written. You've written so much! And I haven't had any time at all. (At last! Summer! Freedom!) This is beautiful, with the cutting truth of everything you write. I love ' chemical imbalances & nuclear fusion/fission of angst ridden arteries of the(ir) heart(s).' especially. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this one. Scientific jargon to express a singularly human feeling. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'just blame it on the adolescent epidemic of reality.' Overall, this is the best line. Sums up and pseudo-agrees, mockingly? with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Beautiful word choice and imagery. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Depicts teenagers' chaos quite interestingly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing poem. I like the imagery of "burns like the artificial lights of vegas" and the way you've used no capital letters is cool. Love it! *lime-girl* |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful and really quite entertaining. lovely poem though, well written and beautifully conveyed into words. !~* noelle *~! |