|Reviews for due to chemical imbalances|
| evm chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Yes. So. This is me trying to catch up on all the poems you've written. You've written so much! And I haven't had any time at all. (At last! Summer! Freedom!)
This is beautiful, with the cutting truth of everything you write. I love ' chemical imbalances & nuclear fusion/fission of angst ridden arteries of the(ir) heart(s).' especially.
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
I really like this one. Scientific jargon to express a singularly human feeling. I love it.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
'just blame it on the adolescent epidemic of reality.' Overall, this is the best line. Sums up and pseudo-agrees, mockingly? with him.
| Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Awesome. Beautiful word choice and imagery. Keep up the good work!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Depicts teenagers' chaos quite interestingly.
| katmonkey chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Amazing poem. I like the imagery of "burns like the artificial lights of vegas" and the way you've used no capital letters is cool. Love it!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
beautiful and really quite entertaining. lovely poem though, well written and beautifully conveyed into words.
!* noelle *!