|Reviews for shirley temple tragedy|
| addie pray chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
This was so beautiful and eloquent. The title drew me in and it got better and better from there. I loved the ending. Well done.
| ttum chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
really love the language rhythm as well.
i like i like the last two lines and the second stanza and the opened myself up all the way to monument to imperfection.-smiles.
| Shinyfighter chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Pretty good imagery. You sure it's not about cutting? J/K