Reviews for Song of Morning
InsomniacDahmer chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Wow... Repetition was actually used very skillfully here to establish interesting, complex structure... Nice job with that and with emotional expression. The last four lines were so sad. You may consider using punctuation at the end of at least the last line, but that's just my opinion. Love and kisses.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Wow so nice! I love this poem! Write on!

Kolus chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
I felt every word of this my good work!