|Reviews for all is evil sept for this heart|
| Strangerwithnoface chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Again, it has potential... but the spelling and the grammer is just terrible. It could use some rhyme too, no offence. But if you WOULD like some help with editing, Im always free.
| Joedore chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
nice...remind's me of a song entitled ONE. gj!