it's like you're breathing life into the painting. wonderful piece.

Ah, quite lovely. I don't know about perfection of technique, but I will say it's pretty close. Love this, excellent, wonderful writing!

Awesome imagery shown here; I can really picture the painting. I love the last stanza!

Beautiful picture you've painted, here. I must say that the first and last stanzas are my favorite.

Nice job.

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that was one of the most single enchanting and beautiful pieces i have ever laid my eyes upon.

you dazzle me.

this is really good. I enjoyed reading such creativity.

~Sorrow~

Excellent work, I really liked it

this is a beautiful achievement. it really does call out similarity to a work of art (convenient considering it was loosely inspired by one) but what I mean is that it has that feeling of being paused in one moment and you are brushing in the details to make it rich and full. I could almost feel the rainwashed air; your repetition of "lanterns, sagging off the pagoda" was so effective. There is such colour and dimension here. goin' on the faves ;) will be looking into more of your work. :)

mezzie