Reviews for A Brave New World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() _ Well, looks like Travis finally got that off his chest! Kinda emo about it, but that;'s the point, huh? _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...I already knew about Travis' past yet I still couldn't help hanging off every word. Now I'm happy, I've read a lovely chapter, and things turned out well. I think the journal entries was one of the best yet, and the writing throughout was more than great. Love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Travis:( Every time I read his story, or he talks about his past, I feel bad for what happened to him. Thank-you so much for doing the talk! You did an awesome job of it and of *course* Kurt doesn't want to leave him! But do you honestly not get barramundi in the US? Seriously? Gah. It's one of the few fish's that I can stomach. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it’s really great that you two are collaborating. It makes the story that much more detailed that there are cultural inconsistencies, such as sandals and thongs, if only because people grow up learning different things and it creates these neat little conflicts. Anyway, I adore this story… it is so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was cheering at that last paragraph, especially the last line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I've just become a fan of you both :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Wow. This was a FANTASTIC chapter; all of the wit, the humor *especially the humor* and the mild romance...I'm liking this story more and more. Please, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the best Kurt chapter thus far. He seems to be coming along nicely, I get so wrapped up in the realistic way you write that I feel like he is real. The watergun semi-fight was cute. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() hey nice story you got here.. erm.. i got a favour to ask you.. please have a cuddling scence next chapt k? |
![]() ![]() Heh no one ever steals anything? Ur kidding right? I know so many ppl who get stuff nicked at surfers... heh go the water pistols! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely freaking adorable! I'm having so much damn fun with these two! LOL! Really, I am! It's amazing how well these two meld. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. This chapter honestly blew me away. I loved it so much that I don't even feel like writing a nice review. So I'm not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too sleepy for a formal review, it's like 3 am here...nice work...*yawns* keep...going...Z *mumbles* good stuff... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant and touchingly beautiful. I've seen some vast improvements in the Travis chapters and I'm enjoying it immensely. Love the story! |
![]() ![]() Heh its so cute so vewy vewy cute... I love this game. |