Reviews for Pretending
jessica chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Hey Hey Hey you have some true talent keep em' comn' and have fun! bye much luv to ya -jessica-
ryan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
hmm...what to say about this one...hm...well...how do you hate feeling feelings...i know there bad ones but there is always loving some one or being happy...those are some good ones...so you dont always hate feeling feelings...i think that you might want to write this one because you you do cut yourself or used to idk...but i like that you could explain a little about your self here...peace
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Beautifully emotive, I olve the lfow of this. The ending especially is really strong. Good work.