|Reviews for heart as cold as ice|
| Richelle LeKire chapter 3 . 6/18/2005
Try writing about more of what you know. Perhaps high school or elementary. but just try notto be so vauge and try to gradually intoduce characters and description. It's hard, but ti makes the differece.
| Richelle LeKire chapter 2 . 6/18/2005
I don't really know what to say. How old are you? You should just try to add a little bit more detail,and as of right now the charatcers are very dull and perfect
| Richelle LeKire chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Erm... you posted this on the writing forum on gaia [lethal-sanity]I'm there are afew mistakes. It's also not very interesting. The first two lines give away too much detail about the charatcers. This should be more gradual.
| queen-lala chapter 3 . 6/18/2005
i like the idea so far, please continue and update soon_
| lindserly chapter 2 . 6/11/2005
I like the story, I'm looking forward to see where you're going with it.