|Reviews for Flowers|
| Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
It's beautiful. I love it. I mean... I can't even explain it. We had this conversation when I was up at your house, about what we'd ever be able to write, and you most certainly have found it. What's more, you've started writing it.
You really must write historical fiction. I just might beat you over the head with my remote control if you don't.
I mean, I just turned off my favourite Moulin Rogue song so that I could properly read it.
It's fabulous, Rachel.
There are some parts that seem far too rushed for the initial and ending tones, and a pocket or two that could be edited to shine rather than glisten. But it's fantastic. The opening and ending parts... Wow.
*gnaws on it* Coconut.
| hatespinnerbait chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
oh that's so very good story in depicting that incident. It's often overlooked in the mass of U.S. history and you really did well in making it seem like the injustice it really was.