And your writing! I love your writing too. I forgot to put that in the last review though that should be a given. I'm fully incapable of giving normal reviews.

Ah. I forgot how overwhelmingly, Joey's-use-of-absymally, unfalteringly, that I adored this poem. I was going to add some more adverbs in there but my brain is on freeze-frame.

I just... I love it.

I can't even explain.

No, I don't love it.

I adore it.

Adore seems stronger in an ironic way.

Yes, I adore it.

Ah it's so beautiful.

The whole concept of threads and woven together, and dreamers and idealism, and storybook endings. I heart it, Rachel.

beautiful. :smiles: i think i can understand what you're getting at. hmm weaving...me liketh...

EB

This is good, I look forward to reading more of your works!

Beautiful and very optimistic, a very enjoyable read.