|Reviews for everybody's dying just to get the disease|
| katherine chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
KILEY! oh my gosh, it's bee nso long.. no fiction for years! gasp gasp gasp.. well your poems are of cours amazing as usual!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
wow.. awesome job.. I love the slvia plath reference & the ending
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
and rocky beaches that bite my feet are always
worth the wind in my hair.
love those lines, and the very end. Perfectly beautiful.
| kayla chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
kiley! i know i already read this with you, but i couldn't resist coming back and reading it and telling you it is amazing! i love the way you incorporated the lyrics of elliot smith,(the coolest because he is dead and used to be steve!)i didnt realize that until i had heard his songs about 15 times and had read this again. Anyway, sly, this is an incredible piece... i feel somewhat attracted and attached to it in a weird way. anyway, it is beautiful.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
I too love Elliott Smith. wonderful poem. it reminded me of him, a lot. love the thing from "Pictures of Me"- the little inside references. wonderful job, again. I'm envious.