Reviews for Gemini Virtual |
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Siren of Lyrics chapter 5 . 10/22/2005 Good chapters! Keep updating! I'm glad you're using Fincarya, can't wait to see it. |
Anonymous chapter 2 . 9/14/2005 This is really worth reading. Please keep updating. |
Rikkumaru chapter 1 . 9/14/2005 This is getting fun! I like how you wrote everything like a real video game! Keep on updating! |
DeuxEx chapter 1 . 6/15/2005 Note: If you are making a character please note that there are 4 wordls! Pastlands, Present, Future, and the Underworld! I like the idea that Siren of Lyrics created and from now on please, I'd love to know your IM and now Fincarya will (might) be a world... (better think about it tho... |
Siren of Lyrics chapter 3 . 6/15/2005 I have a feeling this will be Name: Gwenyth Ironwings Real Name: Glynnis (isn't it a cool name? I found it in my history book) Gender: Female World: (Please ilaborate oh well I'll guess) Fincarya: A dead kindom where there is little water, dragons roam the mountains in heards and guard their hatching grounds fiercely. All Dragon-based units are from here. Want to be a: Tina party (please?) Class: Rider (subclass: Dragon knight: a Warrior skilled at riding dragon back, they soar through the skies and use swords) Attitude/Personality: Intellegent and bold. She is never afraid to speak her mind. She figures things out quickly, and by the time some one else has discovered the problem she's usually has three possible things to do that would be a bad idea. She's the type of person who played with tools as a kid and she's pretty resourceful. She gets on peoples nerves a lot; whenever thay figure something out, she's known it for approxamently five minutes. Weapon Type of Choice: Sword It I made too many asumptions, just tell me. |
C. D. Books chapter 2 . 6/14/2005 I found it kinda hard to not get lost. Maybe its the long paragraphs or the fact I just woke up. God knows. But from what I did put together, I liked. |
Targeter3 chapter 2 . 6/14/2005 lol, sounds just like a game. Home! Inventory, and the game starting characters were cool. Keep writing! |
darkmage78 chapter 2 . 6/13/2005 It's interesting, if not sounding a whole lot like .hack. I do hope it will turn away from that storyline though and be something original because I've always love the virtual reality game stories but they all seem to be alike. Nice touch giving background information and all that and actually going into detail how the game actually works. I hope you update regularly because I'm interested in where you'll take the story. |
Targeter3 chapter 1 . 6/12/2005 Ah, i get it. Pretty much they work on RPG simulation games, with the player immersed in a virtual world? (nods like i'm smart, but really, i'm not) -.- Umm, kinda short for a first chapter, maybe you could write more in the next ones. I'm working on a story sorta like this... update soon! |
Layne R. Pendragon chapter 1 . 6/12/2005 M...Hola.I like where you're going with this and I enjoyed the fact that you gave a bit of background information before starting the "actual story". Most people dun't do tha'...Anyway...The only thing you might want to do is make sure that you add that Playstation does *not* belong to you...And anything else like that. Okies?Otherwise, pretty good. I've added this to my favourite stories list and I hope to read more of it soon. ~Layne R. Pendragon |