Reviews for Heat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is that done? Is that done? NO way! YOu have to update soon! I wanna know what happened! I think Im in love with Jack LOL! He's so sweet... Please Update son or I'll hunt you down! LOL I love this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god...so emotional! update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hiya! you are a genius. (",just when i thought fictionpress had no more stories to entertain me, your story suddenly popped up from nowhere! you're a great writer. keep it up! hope you'll not ditch this one coz' i'm hoping how this story would go. pulez don't let jack die. please! can you send me your story? i'd like to read it over and over again without having to pay much for the net connection. thanks! i'll be looking forward to the next chapterS! get that, it has an S... so that means, there has to be more. hehe... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jack died!OMG! you cannot just end it here! pls tell me this is not the end! T.T oh pls pls...*kneels on the floor and begs profusely* Great story though!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! you can leave it at that! such an evil cliffy! jack cannot die! hope to read more soon! must know what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That...was the saddest thing ever. Please update soon. I...oh my god, Jack... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Hes not dead! He CANT be! -sob- no! Im so sad. I love this story. Its one of my favourites. Your a really good authour. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Do not do a cliffie! i love this story, but you're killing me! update fast please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :: Screams then cries :: I can't believe it. How could you do that? Just when they had finally admitted their love for each other. Please you can't let him die. They deserve happiness. Please don't let Jack die. I am begging you, I love this story, but I will be seriously depressed and distraught if you let Jack die. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You couldn't...You wouldn't...Would you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is completely evil to end it there. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You killed him! You fucking killed him! Who does that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg its getting so good u have a great way to use suspense |
![]() ![]() ![]() four words: don't let him die. Love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! dont let him die! please update soon |