Reviews for Heat
BeautifulSin chapter 16 . 4/15/2006
is that done? Is that done? NO way! YOu have to update soon! I wanna know what happened! I think Im in love with Jack LOL! He's so sweet... Please Update son or I'll hunt you down! LOL I love this story...
helligonian chapter 16 . 4/13/2006
Oh my god...so emotional! update again soon!
polenta chapter 16 . 4/10/2006
hiya! you are a genius. (",just when i thought fictionpress had no more stories to entertain me, your story suddenly popped up from nowhere! you're a great writer. keep it up! hope you'll not ditch this one coz' i'm hoping how this story would go. pulez don't let jack die. please! can you send me your story? i'd like to read it over and over again without having to pay much for the net connection. thanks! i'll be looking forward to the next chapterS! get that, it has an S... so that means, there has to be more. hehe...
DarkestSecrets chapter 16 . 4/8/2006
Jack died!OMG! you cannot just end it here! pls tell me this is not the end! T.T oh pls pls...*kneels on the floor and begs profusely*

Great story though!)
sHortiiL chapter 16 . 4/5/2006
ah! you can leave it at that! such an evil cliffy! jack cannot die! hope to read more soon! must know what happens!
cherrypiesizzle chapter 16 . 4/5/2006
That...was the saddest thing ever. Please update soon. I...oh my god, Jack...
axkillerxenigma chapter 16 . 4/3/2006
OMG! Hes not dead! He CANT be! -sob- no! Im so sad. I love this story. Its one of my favourites. Your a really good authour. Keep it up!
BabyBarth chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
No! Do not do a cliffie! i love this story, but you're killing me! update fast please!
ani18 chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
:: Screams then cries :: I can't believe it. How could you do that? Just when they had finally admitted their love for each other. Please you can't let him die. They deserve happiness. Please don't let Jack die. I am begging you, I love this story, but I will be seriously depressed and distraught if you let Jack die.

Please update soon!
Skeptic-Critic chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
You couldn't...You wouldn't...Would you?
shammi chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
that is completely evil to end it there.

please update soon!
Sunshine Bear chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
You killed him! You fucking killed him! Who does that!
Sangredeluna chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
omg its getting so good u have a great way to use suspense
awaitinglove chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
four words: don't let him die.

Love your story!
Someday-I-will-Understand chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
Ahh! dont let him die! please update soon
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