Reviews for Heat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omgomgomg Intense plot development? aggh I now you jst updated, but update again like now. oh wow, please don't let jack die. (although it would make for a unique story... screw unique. Don't let him die!)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, no way! you cannot kill him! no! that just isn't right! you need to get him to a hospital and save him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! You can't be seriously doing what I think your doing! You can't be killing Jack! No! Why! They love each other...can't you make it all cliche and have him wake back up because of that love! HUH! ::Cries:: This was a great chapter, but so sad. I want to cry...and omg look there are tears running down my face. Just next chapter let it be happy. PLEASE! I'M BEGGING! UPDATE SOON! ~Nikkole~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noo! Don't let him die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! He can't die! he can't he can't he can't! no, no, no, no, no dying! update soon so I can see if he dies or not, seeing as you are into cliffies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word: No... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you can't kill him! Please say that they can bring him back to life...that he just passed out. I love this story...and I can't keep reading it if Jack dies! It won't be the same...just...don't kill him. Please? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() -big eyes- he can't have died! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() no not a cliffhanger! lol update sooner than soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw I loved that chapter! so sweet and filled with romance! excellently written |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! you are such a great author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh. Update soon! Peace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot dammit! Thank God they finally got to it. Their sexual tension was crazy. Hope Sloan doesn't screw it all up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Out of curiosity, did they use protection? Because if they didn't that would make a rather interesting plot twist later down the line, wouldn't you think? Heh heh heh...Sticky situations galore...What fun...What immense fun... |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start- i already love this story and can't wait to see where it's going. ~dropsofjewpiter~ |