Reviews for Heat |
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cdr1687 chapter 8 . 9/29/2005 Like I said broken elevators are either great, or really bad. Who is Joey? I must know, like now. Can't wait to read more. |
cdr1687 chapter 7 . 9/29/2005 Broken elevators can either be great, or really bad. Can't wait for more. Oh by the way her sister is really rude. |
cdr1687 chapter 6 . 9/29/2005 She just wont give in will she. Can't wait to read more. Also by the way really watch the grammar errors. |
cdr1687 chapter 5 . 9/29/2005 Ouch! the part about the hacksaw sounded painful. Love the story and can't wait for more. |
cdr1687 chapter 4 . 9/29/2005 Good, can't wait to read more. |
cdr1687 chapter 3 . 9/29/2005 Oops yeah he is for sure in trouble. Why would he lie about his name? Must read on. |
cdr1687 chapter 2 . 9/29/2005 Almost made the same mistake again. Oh, yeah she is defiantly falling very hard for this stranger. Still some grammar things, but it was good! |
cdr1687 chapter 1 . 9/29/2005 Well, well, well she seems to have got herself in a little trouble. Can't wait to see how she handles this one. Good story, with only a few grammar things that need to be fixed. |
NOLONGERPOSTING chapter 9 . 9/29/2005 I loved it, write more soon! |
pandamonkey17 chapter 9 . 9/29/2005 Wow I love this story! You are a superb writer. |
SouledChampion chapter 9 . 9/29/2005 Argh, I hope Jack doesn't actually believe Julie. And, sheesh, jealous much? What a crappy sister. I mean seriously, if I had a sister like Julie, I think I'd just emancipate myself or something. |
Marylyn-Mercy chapter 9 . 9/29/2005 Great story! Can't wait to see where it goes next! -MM |
DuchessYappingDog chapter 9 . 9/28/2005 Aw. Gosh. Stupid Julie. She wants him. Stupid girl Blah. Stupid Joey too. I shall kel zhem! |
xgummihattx chapter 9 . 9/28/2005 *gah* you can't leave it like that! that horrible! now i wont sleep! *sigh* i guess i'll have to wait, but UPDATE SOON! |
SloanePeterson chapter 8 . 9/23/2005 SO GREAT! please update! |