Reviews for Heat
cdr1687 chapter 8 . 9/29/2005
Like I said broken elevators are either great, or really bad. Who is Joey? I must know, like now. Can't wait to read more.
cdr1687 chapter 7 . 9/29/2005
Broken elevators can either be great, or really bad. Can't wait for more. Oh by the way her sister is really rude.
cdr1687 chapter 6 . 9/29/2005
She just wont give in will she. Can't wait to read more. Also by the way really watch the grammar errors.
cdr1687 chapter 5 . 9/29/2005
Ouch! the part about the hacksaw sounded painful. Love the story and can't wait for more.
cdr1687 chapter 4 . 9/29/2005
Good, can't wait to read more.
cdr1687 chapter 3 . 9/29/2005
Oops yeah he is for sure in trouble. Why would he lie about his name? Must read on.
cdr1687 chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
Almost made the same mistake again. Oh, yeah she is defiantly falling very hard for this stranger. Still some grammar things, but it was good!
cdr1687 chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Well, well, well she seems to have got herself in a little trouble. Can't wait to see how she handles this one. Good story, with only a few grammar things that need to be fixed.
NOLONGERPOSTING chapter 9 . 9/29/2005
I loved it, write more soon!
pandamonkey17 chapter 9 . 9/29/2005
Wow I love this story! You are a superb writer.
SouledChampion chapter 9 . 9/29/2005
Argh, I hope Jack doesn't actually believe Julie. And, sheesh, jealous much? What a crappy sister. I mean seriously, if I had a sister like Julie, I think I'd just emancipate myself or something.
Marylyn-Mercy chapter 9 . 9/29/2005
Great story! Can't wait to see where it goes next!

-MM
DuchessYappingDog chapter 9 . 9/28/2005
Aw. Gosh. Stupid Julie. She wants him. Stupid girl Blah. Stupid Joey too. I shall kel zhem!
xgummihattx chapter 9 . 9/28/2005
*gah* you can't leave it like that! that horrible! now i wont sleep! *sigh* i guess i'll have to wait, but UPDATE SOON!
SloanePeterson chapter 8 . 9/23/2005
SO GREAT! please update!
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