Reviews for Heat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! So who's Joey? Can't wait to find out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was fun. but i couldnt remember joey either. her boyfriend or something? and the timing of the fire department was really bad! anyways, i really like this story, update soon.. and thanks for ur review |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o... Good grief! Wow! I am really liking this! I adore the relationship Kat has with Jack/ Charlie. Really intrigued to find out who Joey is and whether or not Kat and Jack get together. Please, PLEASE! put up a new chapter...love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow dat was like god. keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story so far. I love the plot development, the characters and their personalities, and pretty much everything, really. I'm putting this up on my Favourites; needless to say, I hope you update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey awesome story, great chapter! Hope to see more real soon! I love the quick updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Their stuck in an elevator! Loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh, dat is realy good. lol, her sister is really annoying though...i kno wat its like. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for your next chapter. Kudos |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... amazing story, and I don't usually say that. Post more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there. I love the story. I can't really think of anything negative to say. There are a few typos, but nothing big enough to be irritating. The characters are great and work well together. Luck on the next chapter, I'll add this to my alert list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey plz keep writing its great got me hooked, plz write fast lol i wanna know wat happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I love it. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats a pretty awkward situation! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe, i really liked this chap! |