hehe... i loves it.. up-dates again soon

It's getting interesting. Hm... I smell jealousy. Update soon! )

Oh! You got me curious now. I wonder what type of a role the sister will play in this story...so update! :D Hurry hurry! (am I impatient? no...)

hey! luvin ur story! keep it up! ;D

hehe... i love it, its a bit fast and short... but its good... up-dates soon

Great...one of my faves

hey its a great story and just the type i like a lil law enforcement and tough chick is awesome plz keep writing

really good. i like your honesty and your understanding of your characters. i especially like the jack/charlie thing. update soon, im watching this story, i like it.

ooh, nice story, please update faster! lol, its exciting though.

I dont trust Jack, but this is cool! I thought Charlie was dangerous at first, but alas he dont exist lol. keep it up

I like, I like :)

that was a good twist...please update soon

oh pls update faster! its so exciting!

Hey this is really good! update soon! ;)

Hahahaha, this was such a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.