Reviews for Heat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no. I hope Kat's ok. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! please update sson.,... please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe! omg... i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! I'm going to diee. Make another chapter noww! Makes me sad they broke up. [ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read your story and I LOVE IT! PLEASAE WRITE MORE ASAP! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I love this chapter. I think it's perhaps my favourite chapter, next to the first and second ones of course xP I can't believe after so long you came up with a new chapter..I'm practically crying of happiness! This chapter was brilliant. And you shouldn't care what other people think about this story, as long as you like it..so if a lot of people flame you and criticize it, bullshit. Who cares? ;) Just know that you have a lot of fans out there, and that, honestly, if your story was crap and was some mediocre 13-year-old trying to write, I'd tell you. xD Not saying that all 13-year-olds are bad writers, but a majority of them are not up to par with a lot of older writers, you know? LOL just in case you took offense to that Update as soon as you can! I voted for you on SKoW..haha I'll try to sneak more than one vote in x) I've figured out how -wink- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. FBI agents are my favorite, so of course I was immediately hooked. The entire time Kat was freaking out over Jack being dead or alive, I was having the same thoughts as her. I would have been really ticked if he had died. But this is also pretty bad...they still not being together. *sigh* But drama always works. So, now I want to know about Kat's situation and what's wrong with her. Please put up another chapter soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it...o.o PLEASE continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMYRAH. UPDATE! this is so great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Good chapter. I hope you write another one soon. Don't end it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a great chapter very suspenseful and emotional. i hope that the next chapter comes sooner than this one, because im very eager to read it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss your writing! Please keep this up! I wonder if your gonna make Kat do something horrifying to make Jack come back? |
![]() ![]() ![]() harsh - i like ur writing style but u hav lots of spelling mistakes |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's like pride & prejudice |
![]() ![]() ![]() oo i liked this chappie |