Reviews for Heat
Swimmer07 chapter 18 . 2/15/2007
omg, I love it soo much! please keep it going, I would hate for it to end here
Crystal109 chapter 18 . 2/15/2007
I'm glad you're continuing this story - it was one of the earlier ones I found like, a really long time ago, and I've always hoped that you would continue it. I love how you did so, too. This chapter was pretty moving (the music I'm listening to may have helped with that too, haha), and I like how your characters are still human and not perfect. I'd be really happy if you can update more with the next chapter. I'm guessing you'll want to finish up the story soon because the characters might seem so far away for you to get them back, and I totally understand. But I do like where you're going with that cliffhanger, and hey, whatever you're planning will probably be cool with all your readers. Except, of course, killing everyone off. But then that's a given. )
abc123 chewy chapter 18 . 2/15/2007
no. suspense.

i hate it.
abc123 chewy chapter 17 . 2/13/2007
no... you can't just STOP!
j.c-chic chapter 10 . 1/22/2007
i hate u so bad im dying inside. why is it that everything bad has to happen to kat and then when it looks like their finally together u have to just fuck her life u again?
phelps112 chapter 17 . 1/20/2007
so are u just leaving it there or what? leaving it at a cliffhanger is not very nice
eliza-smiles chapter 17 . 1/17/2007
well that was unexpected, but then again something had to happen becasue of their new found love... i really liked what you did and i really hope that you will reveal what happens next, or was that the end of it all and we are just left to guess? meh anyways great work, off to read some of your other work, cheers
Lilox chapter 15 . 1/6/2007
Please, oh please finish this story! It's great! I've been waiting a long time for an update!
CallaBunny chapter 17 . 1/3/2007
Oh, I love your story! I just want them together for good, and things keep getting in their way! Ah! Please update...
britty-tt chapter 17 . 1/2/2007
I love your story but I don't think you needed to add the whole DC thing to it. You havent updated in 9 months so i think you should just repost this chapter and finish the story. Just cut everything off about the boss calling. Just an idea you seemed to have lost interest in writing this story and I'm sure it would give your readers closure on this story. Cause believe me it sucks to have a fave incomplete story that hasnt been updated in ages. Your story is really good, the plot is defiantly way more original than most stories. Its not cliche and personally i think unique and orginial stories are the best.
Randomisation chapter 17 . 12/28/2006
crap. ah he can't leave! :( such a good story! amazing! please continue:) Happy Xmas
MoriMorte chapter 17 . 12/18/2006
awsome story i'm hooked but i've been wondering is julie sloan's girlfriend and do you think that even kat's ex is in it.

if they are it adds up if not then i'm at a loss

jojo is so cool after the two main characters he's my favorite!

i wish u luck on your writing!

A Dark White Rose
outsomniac chapter 4 . 11/8/2006
ah jack is mr. sexy :3
silliegurl789 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
swimchickslam chapter 17 . 10/18/2006
Haha awesome! :)
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