Reviews for You don't know
Devika-Fay chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
so sad...you're right in that it is kinda repetitive. but it kind of fits, if you get when i mean...
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
I LOVE this, I'm adding it to my favorites!
Rafael Freire chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
oh my...! this IS angst! lol though it's not my thing, it's cool!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
very powerful, but well done.. i can definately relate... great job
MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Oh, i adore this poem. The last line, which was used before i know, really wrapped it up for me. Please keep writing.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
so tragic and beautiful. I love it, as always wonderful work! _ I love the flow this has. wonderful, wonderful work!

!~* noelle *~!
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
this is good. I like it. very deep and i like the ending the most. queenvixta
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
this is touching and heartfelt. very deep and emotional.

~Sorrow~
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
so sad, aw! a good song though, i like how you wrote it
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Wow, very powerful piece here! I can hear it in my head as a song, kind of a Simple Plan guitar/drums style (which is a compliment btw!). You might want to put the rating up one though, just a suggestion. All in all, a great piece! Well done!