|Reviews for Point A Gun|
| AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
"I’m a desperate man, you know" m hmm.
I wasn't saying I was a superiority in "god shaped" I was talking in an ambigious matter about what people think God is. Anyway, I'm sorry if I've been harsh for no reason but you could at least tell me - and not brush me of for NO reason.
I won't continue this conversation on fictionpress but the least you can do is tell me why you're ignoring me for..?
| Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
There's a real sense of falling apart in this, the emotion comes across well. Good work.
| Wicked Witch Krandomity chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
This poem had an edge to it-dangerous, breaking apart, misunderstood. It was actually *kind of* scary. It hit me real hard. That's what poetry's supposed to do, though, right? Make you feel something, meaning. Anyways (before I start rambling), awesome job.